BAD ODE TO A GOOD EGG

This video contains poultry errors (not paltry)…

Sometimes further research reveals contradictions to previous research, and revision becomes necessary. This happened to a poem I considered complete and celebrated with a video. Some of the poem’s assumptions were flawed.

I had a longstanding false impression that if an egg-yolk has a blood, the egg was fertilized. This is not necessarily so. The original ODE TO A GOOD EGG also assumed that egg-candling can be done to separate eggs to be hatched from those to be sold to be eaten as eggs. It seems this determination is made ahead of time. Eggs to be hatched are incubated for a few days then candled to check that the embryo is developing properly. Eggs to be sold as grocery eggs are candled for grading.

In light of all this, I have revised the poem.

 

ODE TO A GOOD EGG

You’ve never been outside
the shell of yourself.
A dim glint of candle flame
was dawn for you, and dusk.

If a rooster had been given his way
to produce a certain murkiness within,
you could have been warmed to life
and pecked through this shell of yourself.

Alas, this is to be
your cold cold home
neighbored by eleven brethren,
But the good news is
there may still be
a sunny side to your future.

– Mike Cohen (2017 poem revised 2020)

 

I don’t now if the poem is improved poetically. But it is more accurate, albeit not impeccable.

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